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Most recent (3rd Jan 08 at 9:27pm UTC)
I haven't been designing much lately but I decided to post the last two sigs I made.

Serious constructive criticism only. No "oh that's cool", or "oh I like it", stuff. Good suggestions please {Smile}

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Re: Most recent (3rd Jan 08 at 9:29pm UTC)
First some seems like there might be too much brushing. I also think the stock could be blended better.

On the second one, I think you sharpened the render too much on the face, if it wasn't sharpen, then it was a layer style... Either way, its too strong, and pulls away from the rest of the sig, I think if you fixed that, it'd work.

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Re: Most recent (3rd Jan 08 at 10:04pm UTC)
On the second one it was a layer style I used in my attempt to work with a TERRIBLE quality render >_> I'll try blurring it and re-upping it.



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Re: Most recent (3rd Jan 08 at 10:13pm UTC)
The First one comes together quiet well

The Second one, its ether too bright on her face, or her whole body, i cant put my finger on it, try toning the brightness down, see if that makes it look a bit better.

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Re: Most recent (3rd Jan 08 at 10:49pm UTC)
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Re: Most recent (3rd Jan 08 at 10:59pm UTC)
Much better. I haven't anything else to rant about it now. {Tongue Out}

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Re: Most recent (3rd Jan 08 at 11:26pm UTC)
better, but try lowering it till you can at least clearly see her nose. I think then it will be good =]

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Re: Most recent (4th Jan 08 at 12:01am UTC)
Second one is way saturated . Like in a way bad way. Is one of your layers on Color Dodge? Cause sometimes it causes an image to be that supersaturated. If one is on CD try toning down the Luminosity

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Re: Most recent (29th Mar 13 at 9:24am UTC)
I think, it's really a helpful and creative post to me.

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