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Most recent - Posted By DysmalNeophyte (ts:DysmalNeophyte) on 3rd Jan 08 at 9:27pm
I haven't been designing much lately but I decided to post the last two sigs I made.
Serious constructive criticism only. No "oh that's cool", or "oh I like it", stuff. Good suggestions please
UPDATE:

Re: Most recent - Posted By Dude™ (austinfarmer) on 3rd Jan 08 at 9:29pm
First some seems like there might be too much brushing. I also think the stock could be blended better.
On the second one, I think you sharpened the render too much on the face, if it wasn't sharpen, then it was a layer style... Either way, its too strong, and pulls away from the rest of the sig, I think if you fixed that, it'd work.
Re: Most recent - Posted By DysmalNeophyte (ts:DysmalNeophyte) on 3rd Jan 08 at 10:04pm
On the second one it was a layer style I used in my attempt to work with a TERRIBLE quality render >_> I'll try blurring it and re-upping it.
Re: Most recent - Posted By SheepToucher (SheepToucher) on 3rd Jan 08 at 10:13pm
The First one comes together quiet well
The Second one, its ether too bright on her face, or her whole body, i cant put my finger on it, try toning the brightness down, see if that makes it look a bit better.
Re: Most recent - Posted By DysmalNeophyte (ts:DysmalNeophyte) on 3rd Jan 08 at 10:49pm
Updated.
Re: Most recent - Posted By Dude™ (austinfarmer) on 3rd Jan 08 at 10:59pm
Much better. I haven't anything else to rant about it now.
Re: Most recent - Posted By SheepToucher (SheepToucher) on 3rd Jan 08 at 11:26pm
better, but try lowering it till you can at least clearly see her nose. I think then it will be good =]
Re: Most recent - Posted By XeroCint (admin) on 4th Jan 08 at 12:01am
Second one is way saturated . Like in a way bad way. Is one of your layers on Color Dodge? Cause sometimes it causes an image to be that supersaturated. If one is on CD try toning down the Luminosity
Re: Most recent - Posted By Jeffrey (jeffrey) on 29th Mar 13 at 9:24am
I think, it's really a helpful and creative post to me.